Some Comments … A Poem …

I like short, concise,

easy to read poems.

No words overly fancy,

overblown cleverness

to impress me.

Just ideas and imagination

to entrance me.

So, for that reason,

I submit these comments

as my poem.

But ……

does my pride

in this matter

precede

My Fall?

After All?

9 Comments Add yours

  1. The answer is : no 🙂

    Liked by 1 person

  2. judybarbera says:

    Nice poem and art!

    Liked by 1 person

  3. Amy Barbera says:

    Dad I LOVE this cute artwork so much!!!! 🙂

    Liked by 3 people

    1. Thanks for your support……

      Liked by 2 people

      1. Amy Barbera says:

        ✌✌

        Liked by 1 person

  4. I agree. Poetry is best when simple. 🕊

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Halbarbera says:

      Yes! When you remove the clutter, distractions, and complexities, things start becoming more clear, easier to understand and manage.

      Liked by 1 person

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