Poetry

Some Comments … A Poem …

Posted by Halbarbera on

I like short, concise,

easy to read poems.

No words overly fancy,

overblown cleverness

to impress me.

Just ideas and imagination

to entrance me.

So, for that reason,

I submit these comments

as my poem.

But ……

does my pride

in this matter

precede

My Fall?

After All?

Published by Halbarbera

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9 Comments Add yours

  1. theatrealtair says:
    October 25, 2019 at 8:55 am

    The answer is : no 🙂

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    1. TheMysteriousBlogger says:
      October 25, 2019 at 9:29 am

      🙏🏼🙌🏽👍

      Liked by 1 person

      Reply
  2. judybarbera says:
    October 25, 2019 at 9:28 am

    Nice poem and art!

    Liked by 1 person

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    1. TheMysteriousBlogger says:
      October 25, 2019 at 9:30 am

      Thanks as always!

      Liked by 1 person

      Reply
  3. Amy Barbera says:
    October 25, 2019 at 5:25 pm

    Dad I LOVE this cute artwork so much!!!! 🙂

    Liked by 3 people

    Reply
    1. TheMysteriousBlogger says:
      October 25, 2019 at 5:36 pm

      Thanks for your support……

      Liked by 2 people

      Reply
      1. Amy Barbera says:
        November 1, 2019 at 11:34 pm

        ✌✌

        Liked by 1 person

  4. SnapDragon X. says:
    December 14, 2020 at 5:13 pm

    I agree. Poetry is best when simple. 🕊

    Liked by 1 person

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    1. Halbarbera says:
      December 14, 2020 at 7:29 pm

      Yes! When you remove the clutter, distractions, and complexities, things start becoming more clear, easier to understand and manage.

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      Reply

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