Can you feel it!?
The cool rain?
The tear on his face?
Can you feel it!?
Why is he so sad?
Has he lost it?
Is it all just a waste?
Can you feel it!?
On this day?
This particular hour?
This one minute?
This moment in space?
Can you really feel it?
The cool rain?
The to-the-bone chill?
The tear drop?
On his oh-so-sad face!?
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Cute sadness
in search of
blissful gladness
or is it just
Insane Madness!?
Cute but with a deep sadness
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Yes!
Cute sadness
in search of
blissful gladness
or is it just
Insane Madness!?
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Oh, this gave me chills, mb
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Thanks! As intended!
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Awh Dad this is so sad both your poem and your picture! Thank you for sharing your heart! 🙂
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Poem written and picture enhanced be invoke sadness and such…
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Very emotional poem,your beautiful words they touched my heart,I’m moved….thank you so much for sharing your wonderful poem and art,is pure emotions! 🙏♥️😊
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Very well appreciated!
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🙏🙏🙏♥️🥰
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No, I can’t feel it. I think he’s just been cutting onions. He’s making a lasagne for one.
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You are probably right!
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